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polarisLove is a physical pain, an aching so intense your body grows to crave it, like a drug.. toxic and slowly eating away at the fragile soul. Falling in love is like falling into death: head first, perilous and terrifying.

And I love her, this not-so-gentle girl with her wild red hair.. like summer kissing autumn's ten-thousand colors.. But despite her endless curiosity, splashes of bitter-sweet violence, music that flowed from any brush she held and gave life to blank canvases… She did not want to paint me in her colors.

With my curves and unfortunately round chest, I was not her blond guardian. Her whimsical ever-present flop of hair, w

jarsI am red ink
little boats,
clouds

you are arrows
and flames
and futures, with filled jars in them

I am a small breath in the dark,
space to fill and be overlooked

he's yours

I'm no ones

this is okay.

I imagine mornings for you,
and songs unwritten..
poems yet unthought of

you are valentines days and
red roses and sweet things,
always

and perhaps someday
I will turn and peer into a coffee shop

perhaps you'll have painted hands

but I will weep then,
not today,
for unfolded paper
and unfilled jars

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Submitted: April 9, 2012
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Resolution: 1280×853

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Make:Canon
Model:Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
Shutter Speed:1/30 second
Aperture:F/5.6
Focal Length:80 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Apr 9, 2012, 12:57:53 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop 7.0
Sensor Size:9mm

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Critique by ~lexie11 Apr 9, 2012, 1:21:07 PM

Wow amazing work. I love the contrast and lighting. I also admire the message you are trying to send with this amazing artwork. I feel that you could improve this by angleing the camera slightly. If you angle it down alittle more so that you can see the face of the clock it would be great. Also you could fix that simply by just moving the top flap thing down alittle. I love the great amazing colors in this because they really catch your eye. I also love how it looks like the watch is lost. This gives you the feel that you are going back in time. Keep up the good work.

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~ChOcOlAtE-Ryuu Apr 9, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

ooooooooo I love this!
I like that you don't see all of the clock.

=seeinglight Apr 9, 2012 Photographer

Thanks, I'm glad you like it (:

~ChOcOlAtE-Ryuu Apr 10, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Your welcome.

~DesertPanther Apr 9, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Pretty!

=seeinglight Apr 9, 2012 Photographer

Thanks! (:

~DesertPanther Apr 9, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

You're welcome :3

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