Maybe you'd get more of a splash if you dropped the water from a higher vantage point? On the other hand, this thing definitely makes me want to scarf down a nice, juicy orange, so you definitely provoked a response...
...but then I'd have to go shopping on Easter, and no one should encourage shops to be open on a holiday.
Good photo, maybe consider focusing on one part, make one aspect of the photo really crisp and clear for example focus in on the water bubbles in the foreground pouring over the side of the orange it all seems to be a bit.... fuzzy atm, Its good to try stuff out though, i hope this helps, this is only my opinion maybe others will have better advice
Thank you! I know, I really don't like the foucus either. I think the majority of the blur is from the moving water :/ Should have used a faster shutter speed.
Im not a camera expert or anything, did you use continuous shots? i have tried something like this before: [link] Not exactly the same style but i know it was very time consuming, lighting is also an issue to consider. i hope you keep going with this!!!
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