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watching youi love watching you,
when your eyes are far away and the corners
of your mouth turn up slightly - smiling
at some old memory or private joke

and i, quietly looking down,
smile too; sharing in
your secret happiness

but always, something shakes you to awareness
and your eyes focus, looking around
to draw your paper closer. and i
break a little more in knowing
you cannot be happy for more than a moment,
eternally stuck in your far-away universe.

maybe you'll come down
and notice me someday?
to write for youi wanted to write a poem for you.
so i sat down,
quietly - pen in hand -
and wept. because i cannot
contain the ocean in a paragraph,

i can't shape your eyes
in a stanza. and even
if all the world's birds were singing,
it still would not compare
to the symphonies of your kiss;

and this makes me sad!
through wild and happy fields
i've ran, only to discover:

tears can be captured,
but love is always free.
just pretendingyou're just pretending
when you kiss me, and the
sky breathes softly down
on your eyelashes.

when you glance quickly to the side,
decide not to look me in the face.

i will never re-wear that
polka dot dress or wish
i was a street lamp - because
sea-salt stains are
extremely hard to wash out.

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Sorry I haven't submitted anything in a few days..

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Critique by ~NedMagdaleno May 19, 2012, 3:03:44 PM
Astounding photo!
The color correction is amazing, and it must have been difficult getting the lighting right.
Has a great feel, and a touch of a little vintage in there.
Superb!

Although, you could have gotten a better angle.
Perhaps at eye length with the animal and focused more on it's form.

The animal does appear to be in an awkward situation. Then again, you can't force a picture otherwise it'll be less than it's worth.

Again, great color, the feeling is great, and the picture is a priceless memory! Great focusing in on the animal, and use of the blurry background!
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*JulianasGrandma Dec 8, 2012
So sweet:iconwalkingcatplz:
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=seeinglight Dec 8, 2012   Photographer
(:
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*hayzy Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww: what a cutie

cats really can sleep in crazy places :P
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Mood: Love ~Dark-Erotic-Weapons Oct 9, 2012
strange how this cat felt this relaxed enough to just not care where he/she lies her head
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*Lust0fADeeperPain Oct 9, 2012
what an odd way for a cat to sleep :lmao:
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=seeinglight Oct 10, 2012   Photographer
He's a very, very strange cat.
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*Lust0fADeeperPain Oct 10, 2012
It seems so by looking at the way he is sleeping here I used to have a white cat that did strange things he used to nod out a lot sitting up and my sister and I used to laugh about that :lmao:
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~icecube13 Jun 1, 2012
dwaaa so cute~
It's a cat nap ^^
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Mood: Adoration ~Lil-Plunkie May 28, 2012  Student General Artist
awwww!! i added to my Tumblr hope thats ok? i always credit [link]
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=seeinglight May 28, 2012   Photographer
Of course, as long as you linked back to this page (:
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